Look at me; don't be afraid
I will not hurt nor cause you pain
I only wish to be of help
I promise you I will not tell
And if your eyes have shed much tears
I'll be right there, you have me near
And if your fears make you go wild
I'll walk with you a thousand miles
Until you get to that one place
That you've been searching all these days
Let's walk together hand in hand
I'm here for you, my sweetest friend
Author notes
I wrote this poem on another site as an improvised poem.
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. Lucky person who you wrote this to. I love it. You really are a poet, you know that?
-Lyneun -
very good
I love the passion in these words, this poem must have had sentamental value to you. The reader can really feel that. I enjoyed it
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FRIENDS
That is what a friends should be you know... Great poem keep it moving
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Friends...most definitely the one thing nobody should be without. And a best friend...you cannot measure their importance.
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ahhh...this was good. I liked this whole overall thought. It's a caring, helpful friend poem. We really should see more of these poems. There was one typo 3rd line from bottome it's "these" not "this" other than that....great job!
PoeticThunder* -
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Thanks for the comment Poetic Thunder. I made the corrections.
Thanks for taking the time to read it!
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