I've waited here all day, trapped in mist and shadow...
waiting for you to call me, waiting to let my spirit go.
Peeling off my jacket, rough leather draped over the chair,
helmet resting in one arm, shaking raindrops from long hair.
You know I'm just a dream that you conjured in your sleep,
that I won't be here tomorrow, lost again amid the deep.
But for now I am alive, given breath by your fantasies,
watching with dark eyes as you reveal forbidden ecstasy.
Caught in a silken whisper, desires you dare not speak aloud,
I slip out of my clinging tank and push rough denim down.
Reaching out to find you, drag your body to my chest,
I wont let you sleep peacefully; I'll never let you rest.
I want to torture you with pleasure, an agony of blissful sin
until your insides tremble, begging for release again.
My hair damp with rain, cool skin pressed to yours,
warm fabric is forgotten, pushed aside as we explore.
No words are spoken, no sound at all but a ragged gasp,
a growl of urgent hunger, the heat of my tongue's rasp.
Waking every nerve, body exposed to the touch of my eyes,
blue darkening to ebony; intentions bear no disguise.
Falling to the rough carpet, hands tangled in long hair,
the rush of possession burns inside...I want you there.
Waiting on the edge, legs open in wanton invitation,
eyes clouded with lust, a wildly sinful invocation.
Thick heaviness pushed inside, filling heat with pulsing heat;
an invasion of primal hunger, awakening the beast.
Eyes glaze with a flare of want, hips settled against yours,
rocking deep inside you, pin your body to the floor.
Hands shape your waist, eager to touch and learn,
teeth sink deep into skin, the flame of ownership burns.
You belong to me tonight, and my body is yours--
use my strength for pleasure, release ourselves by turn.
There is no love tonight to cloud what we're after,
no passion to dilute the urge to capture
you within my arms and drag you to my chest,
push deeper inside you, an animal caress.
Is that what you thought, that I was an easy high,
to chase away pain with the pleasure I provide?
But when we lay still, the beast inside ebbs with my lust;
clear eyes of blue will watch, to seek out elusive trust.
I can be an animal, a wolf to claim his mate--
or I can be gentle, either urge you wish to sate.
Because I am a figure of dreams; I don't exist.
Can you mourn for what you never missed?
Satisfied and content, your body languid and half-asleep,
I'll carry you to bed and tuck you carefully in,
press a kiss to your forehead and leave as I entered,
for I am just a shadow...no beginning and no end.
Author notes
Not the most classical romance ever written, but I'm not that kind of man. It's as wild and instinctive as I am, but it's not crude. It's a story about what was intended to be a one-night stand, only the man had other plans...he wanted more than one night--he wanted her.
A contest entry
- Males Only by Dorcha Runda.
400 points, ended March 3, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hopelessy Romantic Guys by Ice queen 17.
300 points, ended April 5, 2007, 37 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - erotic lust or making love by Blissfullhatred.
800 points, ended August 24, 2008, 14 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very lovely.
Billy's Baby
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nice
nice write for the prompt . . liked "Can you mourn for what you never missed?" and "I am just a shadow . . . no beginning and no end" . . good luck in the contest . . -
nice
nice write for the prompt . . liked "Can you mourn for what you never missed?" and "I am just a shadow . . . no beginning and no end" . . good luck in the contest . .
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Wow, this is very sad!
I was not expecting the sudden turn, but I liked it very much. Same thoughts as my latest and presented in a very original way.
"Hands shape your waist, eager to touch and learn,
teeth sink deep into skin, the flame of ownership burns.
You belong to me tonight, and my body is yours--
use my strength for pleasure, release ourselves by turn."
^Such dark thoughts in this stanza. It's amazing what some people think and do in this world!
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Very sensual and romantic without being crude or overly erotic. A sense of abandon and desire expressed throughout the poem. The imagery is very vivid and imaginative. A dream lover is the best kind, they never say no and never let you down. Well done. I loved it.
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I love how this line flows, first of all:
"Peeling off my jacket, rough leather draped over the chair,
helmet resting in one arm, shaking raindrops from long hair."
"blue darkening to ebony; intentions bear no disguise." <-- I love this line the best out of the entire poem I think.
I' would quote more, but i'd just have to re-post the entire poem, for it is flawless, as your work always is. You are a master in rhyme and flow, I hope to be able to write like that someday.
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omg that was totally amazing....very sexy i loved it good luck hun thnks for entering
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WOW
You write a wildness in passion...If I still walked in tender years..I would blush, but as I don't, (She flutters her fan) Me thinks it's warm in here. I couldn't resisted(Smiling)
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Just a shadow...a wolf to claim his mate. Wow, hot poem but done so tastefylly. Good luck in your contest. Cari
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Expressive Work
Reaching out to find you, drag your body to my chest,
I wont let you sleep peacefully; I'll never let you rest.
I want to torture you with pleasure, an agony of blissful sin
until your insides tremble, begging for release again.
My hair damp with rain, cool skin pressed to yours,
warm fabric is forgotten, pushed aside as we explore.
No words are spoken, no sound at all but a ragged gasp,
a growl of urgent hunger, the heat of my tongue's rasp.
Waking every nerve, body exposed to the touch of my eyes,
blue darkening to ebony; intentions bear no disguise.
Damn Bro! Good one. No, great one I mean. Such powerful and real images conjured up. I could sense and feel each emotion. Fine job. Well penned verses as well.
-theQueen"
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Fantastic!!!
Oh wow, this whole piece was beyond amazing. The passion stirred within me as I read. I especially like the blissful sin part You have such a great talent. I couldn't stop reading. I loved the idea of a dream and how this was all just fantasy. The questions you posed were very logical and thought-provoking. This was truly a pleasure to read. There's not a single part I didn't like. And the visionary words were great as well. Magnificent!
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Wow... intense and sensual, beautifully erotic and well-penned. Rather sad too, that it is only a dream... and still so intruiging and emotional. I love it... had me wrapped up completely from beginning to end.
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Fuck me! that was bloody hot! thanks for entering and the best of luck to ya.
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Wow, I wish I had that, I mean that beautiful dream of sensual passion. Tjsi was wonderful. The only guy I will find is in my dreams.
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Wow this is divine sensuality at its best!!! If only all figures of dreams or imaginations were this good we'd all desire never to be awake or in the real world ever again lol. An excellent write which I know will bring pleasure to many readers. Good luck in the competition.
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Oh absolutely wonderful!!!!!! This is one of the best writes ,( in my opinion ) that you have written. The depth of feeling and the magical way the words trap the reader right to the end is excellent. So much so that i shall re-read this masterpiece. we all have fantasies my friend and this could be everyones...Brilliant...mal
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