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Behind The Fog

I wish you could see through my eyes when I look at you
If even for just one moment frozen in time
If only the world could see you the way I do
Looking at you I see so much more
Than meets the eyes
You're true desire are hidden inside
Behind the fog that is you're eyes
You long for some one to love you
The way you deserve to be loved
I see the fear and all the tears
That do not fall from you're brown eyes
Looking into you're soul
I see my whole world
I see the man I love
Looking deep into you're eyes I see my whole life
I was born again when I met you as
You're kisses saved my life
Behind the fog that meets the eye of everyone else
I see the man thats meant for me

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  • ea silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    such a sad poem and a good take on the photo as I also say this bridge and its reflection as an eyeball. Thank you for your entry.