Charcoal- Black
Pulp with tree's twenty four/seven
to me within this i am in heaven, look
and see, as you think who could that
be, what is not you can make it be
free,free within my tortured mind if
you think please don't rewind, but if
you do i will not mind
Sitting alone or being sad i can even be
so ever mad mad mad
Within this i am so isolated but yet i
am not, forgive me i can not mention for
what
Clown,towns cities and moons even within
my mind i am looney tunes
Emotion that cause co motion that can run into
locomotion, freaky or calm or even a bomb i
can evem make a smile to my mom
For this is my Obsession that is with me all
the time, tic ticktock ticktock 24 hours a day
evenwhen i sleep
Author notes
Obsession and love,where is the line drawn
A contest entry
- Secret Obsessions by HisBreathlessDream.
1050 points, ended March 13, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Hahaha liked the flow of the piece. I think you made a typo or two at the second to last section... but otherwise well done.
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Loved the piece
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