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sincere "I miss you"
over a long distance
phone call


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10 words.

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 28, 2007

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    Heart warming and beautiful.

    Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest.... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.


  • lie
    February 27, 2007

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    I can relate to receiving a loved one's phone call, when not being able to see them.
    Great job, I feel like the first commenter that it does prohibit the piece a little, considering it could only be ten words. But I liked it none the less.
    I loveed how you described yourself in a unique manner, instead of giving personality traits and the like, you're able to talk about your present situation that describes you.
    As always, best of luck.


  • TheCrazyBeautiful
    February 27, 2007
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    Aw, that's sad.

    But I think the ten words thing kinda held it back.


    • sweetpearl
      February 27, 2007
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      it's not suppose to be sad ... it makes me happy to hear that he misses me

      • TheCrazyBeautiful
        February 27, 2007
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        I see what you mean...

        But the fact that it's long distance kinda adds that sad element in there.

        But now I'm seeing it as being happy.

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