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Fog- Acrostic

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FOG-ACROSTIC








Fear stirs within my heart as I make my way into this forbidden land

Obstacles of pain and torture await my every step

Gearing up I say a prayer, as I take a step into the mighty fog

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Thanks for this inspiration and for holding this contest!

A contest entry

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 28, 2007

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    I can really feel this write. Prayer is the anwer for those who believe. My faith is escaping into the misty fog. Good luck in the contest.

    Jeannie

  • ea silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    I like the final line which seems so positive after the initial feeling being wary of going forth that this poem set up. Well done and thank you for the entry.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    February 27, 2007
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    When I first saw the title to this piece, I said to myself, what in the world could he be writing about " fog ". LoL. Well after reading all I can say is WoW.
    Excellent piece my friend. Your talent amazes me.

    Manyblessings2u & yours
    Joyce


  • troyias silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    Rich

    Love this jeremy it is just wonderful saying so very much in just three lines Good job.

    *Go with God* my Friend

    Valerie