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What Makes Me Smile

Missing image

Your heart

Resonating with mine

So perfectly -

Transcending

All appearences ...


Author notes

this poem won silver in butterflydreams' contest :
"10 words" http://allpoetry.com/contest/2341314

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  • Pure Thought silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    There is no bird and human...

    only two beings sharing the Silence in complete understanding.
    Beauty of purity of heart and spirit.
    Buddy


    • maa gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      yes, she is sitting on my head now, reading your comment ... in her own particular way ... she fully agrees with you ...
      thank you so much for your applause and sweet comment,

      marion


  • Princess Perdue gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    Simply beautiful,our pets and animals bring so much pleasureand peace. Well done and good luck in the contest.

    Shaz xx

    • maa gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      thank you so much, dear shaz, for having added your sweet smile on my page ... together with your kind words and generous applause ...

      marion


  • tawk gold member
    February 27, 2007
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    Just beautiful is all I can say. Wow!!!

    • maa gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      thank you so much, sweety ... it's a pity that I can't send you any stars for this ... they just don't appeared
      but I send you a hug instead,

      marion


  • Whoochi gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    wow..i clicked on the what makes me cry one, and then this one...how joyful....wow...to share with ones heart, yes, i guess that would make me smile...love the picture...says calmness, serenity , in tune with one, Gods creatures, big or small...Good luck! Great job!

    • maa gold member
      February 27, 2007
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      dear whoochi,
      thank you again for visiting and for leaving your colorful footprint on this page ... your applause is very much appreciated as well ...

      marion


  • Sacrificial Love
    February 27, 2007
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    How beautiful...

    Short and sweet...
    concise and warm...

    Beautifully penned...

    xoxo
    Heidi


    • maa gold member
      February 27, 2007
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      thank you so much, heidi ...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    Exquisitely penned!

    Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.

    • maa gold member
      February 28, 2007
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      I am so grateful for this silver trophy, dear donna ... thank you soooo much ...
      the message that I have sent to myself () was to live in unity with all that is ... realizing the illusion of separation and death ... now, I have to put this into practice ...
      thank you for having encouraged me to walk this path with confidence ...
      much love,

      marion

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