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She makes my cheeks hurt from grinning all night long.


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well she does, lol

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  • penman gold member
    March 10, 2007
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    Short, but vivid.

    You truly sad so much in a short line. Excellent image.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    What a perfect smile, I know this feeling, along with the silly laughter.
    Nicely done!
    Best to you!


  • EmeraldDreams
    February 27, 2007
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    Thats such a sweet line! Its great when you have someone who makes you smile and smile like that!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    Wow, she must be wonderful. This is excellent! Loved it!

    Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x

    Love and light,
    Butterfly.