Gentle whispers,
In the night
Telling me, I'm
"The one"
Author notes
10 words on what makes me smile
A contest entry
- In 10 words by Lavender Butterfly.
370 points, ended February 28, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short and Sweet
Although I love your longer poems very much, I am beginning to be partial to your ever so short ones. It's like you wrap up an entire night or an entire emotion into one short poem and you do it so well. I only wish that I could express myself this well. Your words are beautiful to read.
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Thank you I'm glad you could feel the emotion flowing from this piece
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Well..
... Yes that would make anyone smile. I hope it would anyways. Sweet words. I have never written a poem in 10 words or less lol. Maybe I should try. Good luck in your contest. Kassie
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I agree this should make anyone smile I know it would make me grin ear to ear
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Such a wonderful feeling this does bring to ones heart and soul. How perfectly wonderful a smile it brings along with that warm cozy feeling.
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Nice one, made me smile too!!
Good luck in the contest dude,
Brenden
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doesnt it though something so simple as a whisper can make you grin ear to ear
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How exquisitely divine!!!
Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x
Love and light,
Butterfly.
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Thank you for your kind words
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