sisters [soon bound by blood] -
- crucibles of making, manufactured young,
to bend without braking. Named 'princess' -
- how do they differ from slaves ...
and what is suffrage, lacking a free destiny?
A contest entry
- Short but amazing by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think (Critical Honesty Appreciated)
Comments
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Powerful and brilliant
Interesting, thought-provoking, and brilliant piece of writing here. Deep and proufound. Stunning in it's power.
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Now this one is incredibly thought provoking. I read it three times over to grasp its actual impact. Very profound and intelligently expressed. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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