Youth blossomed
in the Spring;
children so quickly
becoming adults,
hardly a pause in between.
A contest entry
- Short but amazing by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 12 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - master of brevity ~ #1 by Namita.
600 points, ended April 30, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very true. Short write, but so very amazing. You deserved a Gold trophy. I wish that I could write like this. Your words flow seamlessly. Wonderful job!
Safely hidden in the darkness,
~The Rocker who lost all aka Sacred Shadows
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I am so glad to see that gold trophy. This certainly deserved it. Great job.
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Well written ~ I like the way you've mixed tenses to highlight the passage of time so quickly, and the final line serves to neatly underline the whole piece.
Good stuff! Best of luck
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Always the bigger picture, great write, best of luck buddy,
Brenden
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Something so short can be truly concise and speak absolute volumes. Well done. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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Nice Poem
Indeed Short but amazing
A pleasure reading it
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