I gaze at you across the room, you capture my soul.
Never to be the same again, my innocence is revealed.
Though young, my destiny is sealed this day.
Serenity floats across, entwining two hearts.
Little does she know that time has ceased through this eternal glance.
Author notes
Painting by Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- Short but amazing by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautifully written an amazing way to show the picture. Very tender and so romantic. Well done.
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i love the pix ...i can see the look os love in her eyes ...good luck in the contest ...cheeky
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Such a thought provoking little write. Truly profound and captivating. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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