Though light glow,
& darkness fall,
though rain shine,
or snow float down,
and though my ears whine
or heart one day be still,
without you I be chill,
and with you I know fire.
One day we'll be gone,
One night life will sever
from the branch drop fruit
no thing will live forever.
I think upon this life,
I think on toward death,
I dream, I laugh, I cry,
but cherish every breath.
A contest entry
- Poetry Themes by Nicole Hanna.
1000 points, ended March 3, 2007, 21 entries
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Comments
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I liked the subtle rhyme in here. Wasn't in your face and worked very well when considering the content of the poem. It had a great flow from beginning to end, which I appreciated. Thanks for your entry.
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mind to mind the differance of mind old man
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