Dressed in our finest after a day spent in church.
We wait on Sunday dinner, that Mom and Grandma cook.
Setting the table as we always do, as Dad and Grandpa
sit on the porch in a gentle summer breeze,
sipping honeyed tea as the sun slowly sets.
A contest entry
- Short but amazing by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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With the changing of human hearts, Fast time and so many old home houses.
Your this poem makes us see what beauty of FAMILY we're all missing.
Take care;
Pretty.
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Such beautiful imagery this portrays. Makes me want to be in that place right now. Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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Nicely done, a very positive and lovely take on the picture. Very upbeat and full of a families love.
Sweetly penned.
Best to you!
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