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Little and the Young Blond...

Little were my dreams
When little was I as she
She chuckles at little jests
As I stand here in the twilight
Of dreams,wishes and my ardors

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"Teenage is the twilight of life"

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 27, 2007

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    you know i agree, and i don't wanna go through my twilight again, this is a great poem that just made me think, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    February 27, 2007

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    Thank you for this sweet and lovely little piece. Good luck in my contest... x Love and light, Butterfly