This is what happens:
You miss a call here- busy
Then it's been five years.
Please tell me what you think
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I know a case or two
Hiatua (may we not have a gap of understanding now),
"We'll keep in touch- we promise." has grouped a warning and mental note until grapes come up that can yet go sour. Thus, an aha of "happens" happened, with a resonance of what action could take place however.
The second line is the most visual, to serve the regulated haiku flavor. Hence, it probably why this lent itself to a real life situation. I recall a young mother never wanting to start the van but rather the doorknob if she heard ringing. Maybe connections were important besides destinations due to it could end up feeling like going nowhere without them for sometime.
And such duration was specifically heavy over what that gradual could deliver, like the last verse asserted. Which oddly enough that was felt in the fast forwarded short poem to contribute to abrupt recognizing that can occur.
Just doing some commenting, no no need to look at my poetry since I'm not thinking of it freshly... which also makes me think of your username, like writing might create a break from something else -- i.e. a broken tip of the pencil scheduling things>>> it used to crack me up but I think I'm just cracked now.
~Carolyn
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