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The Time Before

I watch it start to bleed again
Much worse than the time before
Blood stains the sink again
I crumble to the floor

How long will it last this time?
My body starts to shake
I leave my body lifeless, wondering
How much more I can take

I stare into the mirror
At the mess life has made
I'm starting to get dizzy now
Images begin to fade

I lose myself in this numbing pain
Nothing matters anymore
I let myself die again
Just like the time before

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  • Simply a Memory
    November 12, 2007

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    great write

    I've been through this time and time again, so I know where you are coming from. You potrayed excellent imagry, thanks for entering and good luck.
    ~Stormy~


  • Ramona Wright
    March 1, 2007
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    Good job i know here you're coming from and i know its hard. good write though keep it up.


  • ThankfulSoul
    February 27, 2007
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    Great Imagery. So much pain in it. I hear ya. I wish cutting was truely a way to get rid of the pain, I know it isn't I have tried and gotten no where good with it. Take care and this poem is really good.