i don't know what has come over me
my eyes just no longer wanna see
inside i see you on my heart
it's then i know my love is going to start
right here with you
baby, i know this is so true
with my brain im still naive
but near you i cannot breathe
shooting stars fly overhead
but i just see your face instead
you look me in the eye
i turn so very shy
you take my hand
it's then i understand
your the only one that sets me on fire
your the fuel to my desire
i melt under your sweet touch
my heart just feels so much
you baby, are the only one it seems
that makes me live my dreams
shooting stars fly overhead
but i just see your face instead
Author notes
This is to my boyfriend Jake. I love him so.
Please tell me what you think
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omg...this is so wonderful...so full of emotion...and feeling...you must be in love..if not you are just a wonderful writer...great job
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yes hehe i am in love. but also a wonderful writer. hehe jk. but thanks for the comment. means much ^^ ♥
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i wish i knew that feling so deep still this was a great peace i liked it alot great job and keep it up
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hey
someday you will feel when the times right. never give up hope.
. im glad you like this. means a lot. thank you. ♥
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I like how you're talking about the shooting stars. funny how we can get so "star struck" with out emotions. I hope you're not falling completely head over heals, because most the time that doesn't end well. But I'll definatly vouch for this being cute. -deep one
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hey
lol thanks. i agree with the star stuck thing lol. yeah but too late i already am. i love my bf soo much. an he loves me the same. we talk about our future alot and how we both want each other to be in each others futures. hes the sweetest man i have ever met. lol yes man...hes 18. thanks for your comment. ^^
♥
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very good
if just once one of those shooting stars cold just clonk my right on the head i would feel like i was in heaven and would most likely be keep doing well
love papa
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hey
awe thats a nice things about wanted to feel like in heaven but your stillt oo young for that . thanks for your comment. ♥
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hehehe i like this one
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hey,
lol im glad. thanks for the comment. ♥
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i know he has to have loved this poem it was great you did a gret job on it, and all i can think to really say is keep it flowing
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hey
yeah he probably would. but he doesnt understand poetry at all. lol. im glad you like this and thanks for your comment. ♥
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