As the meandering stream
Runs by
All that is heard
Is the sound of running water
It swooshes and glides
It splashes and sparkles
And then continues on its way..
The powerful fire
Makes everyone fear it
It slashes and explodes
The colors so bright
They temporarily blind you
It rips and destroys
Everything in its way
And then it finally dies down
And leaves all its waste
Behind..
As you step over beautiful flowers
Gaze up at giant trees
Lay in the gorgeous grass
Think about
Why they are all there..
Because of our precious earth
We have all of nature
It was all created because
Of our earth..
The air swirls,
Blows and calls
The air has many emotions
It flutters around everything
Blowing when angry
Silent when sad
Breezy when happy
It never stays in one spot
The air is always moving
It is never still..
A contest entry
- Elements (Water, Fire, Earth, Air) by tabbykat10988.
600 points, ended February 27, 2007, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPTIONS FOR EVERYONE!!! by NooNiThEWitcH.
425 points, ended March 8, 2007, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was great! the flow was good and the descriptions were awesome.
Liz -
This is lovely!
I really enjoyed reading it. Water, Fire, and Air. Each has a different feel and may be a different story.
Thank you for writing and entering in my contest. Keep it up and Good luck. I know which option you chose, but I hope you put it in your author's notes as well
Nooni
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wow... i love it... it flows so smooth... and i love the descriptions... great write and good luck in the contest...
-tabbykat -
I love it baby very creative and lovely it makes me peaceful and happy to read such a poem
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