Breathtaking experiences,
Is what you have given me.
Remarkable intimacy,
Is how I feel near you.
The knowledge of our love,
And how we will last forever,
Makes me smile and live again.
My heart throbs,
With the sensation of love,
That you give to me.
Never let me go,
Because the inwardness of passion,
Makes reality impressive.
There is no sophistication,
In your taste, your touch,
Because your techniques,
Send me into heaven.
I love this sensation,
Of being with you.
Author notes
Love poem of course!
About my wonderful Finace Zach I love him to death.
October 17, 2008!!!
A contest entry
- biggest contest in allpoetry history! (i hope) need 1,000 entries!! by Gasp.
1300 points, ended July 11, 2007, 638 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Best of the Best! by The-Phoenix.
450 points, ended June 19, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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love it!! full of emotion,gives the reader a warm feeling...
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You really bring the love out through this piece. It's very ebautiful. I like how you begin with couplets. Great work
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This is a very sweet poem. Makes me feel like falling in love! Good Job.
Thank you for entering!
~Phoenix
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it is well done!!!
your description of love, your phrase are advanced
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Great imagery
great write..Good luck in my contest
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I liked you descriptions in this "My heart throbs" was a very vivid image to me. I enjoyed this. Thanks for entering.
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I want this ...where do I sign up...you have expressed every womans desire!
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Very nice, well done and a wonderful expression of love and passion.
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Absolutely beautiful peice!
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Absolutely beautiful and so breathtaking! I hope you show your love this precious piece...I really enjoyed the read! Smiles, Terry
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Breathtaking experiences,
Is what you have given me.
lovely words matching a lovely poem well done. good luck in my contest
laura xx -
wow
very nice... I like the way it is broken down into stanzas, it adds umph to it. excellent. I LOVE YOU HUNNY -
Hey, cool poem you have here. I usually don't read the love poems and that, but this wasn't bad! It was real and flowed nicely. Nice job with this, I enjoyed reading it!
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I usually don't like love poems, becuase I'm not really the mushy type, but I loved this! It wasn't the normal mushy stuff, but expressed raw, REAL feelings (one's which I can relate to teehee <3) and I think this is a beautiful write. Very nice job.
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Thanks.
Glad you liked. I am not usually the mushy person. I like darker stuff so I am sure that is why I don't try to write the usually mushy crap lol.
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I love this poem is it okay if I share it with the one I love.
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Hey
Sure. Glad you like it.
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Aww. I read that to my fiancee, and all he said was 'I love you, baby.' =3 Hehe. Your poem got him to say it to me for the first time all night. Thank you.
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Ahh, how romantic.
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Thanks.
Thanks, but it really doesn't compare to how much I really love him Lol.
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