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Angel Whispers

This icy wind
is burning my face again
I'm no quitter,
but I'm tired of fighting
so now I'm leaving it up to fate,
to tie up the ends of a dream.
I'm afraid to say I'm scared
but I'm too far gone to turn my heart around
so when the confidence is over,
and the glitter starts to fade,
I'll follow my dreams...
I'll follow my heart...
and the
        angel
          whispers
in my ear
will speak the words of inspiration
to help me chase the lightning from the sky
and help me to stand up
after a long time of
        lying
            on
              the
                  ground
        ---
thank you, Angel

Author notes

for my Gaurdian angel and Protector...
you know who you are
(Happy Birthday!)

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  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    April 5, 2007
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    I LOVE THIS!!! This is very beautiful, the best I read of urs! Keep up the great work!


  • HugsForEveryone
    February 27, 2007
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    I liiiiiike

    great job on this poem. I like how you indented parts of it.


  • chaostheory89
    February 27, 2007

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    i love your style of writing. keep on writing and keep on dreaming one day it will all be worth the pain


  • Ashes and Air
    February 26, 2007
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    dear , thank you.... Ilove it!!!!!

  • LIve For Today
    February 26, 2007
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    a very good poem , keep writing

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