I cover my face
with the darkness
eyeliner and mascara
dripping down my face
Scratch marks
across my back
a little blood
left to trickle
I was caught
in your silky web
ready to be eaten alive
baby, nibble my flesh
For I am here
to serve you
to please you
to love you
and You are here
to dominate me
to hurt me
to love me
But a lone handprint
sits on your chest
My signature
Who's your daddy now?
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whoa! Nice ending! Didnt see that one coming. Great poem! I feel the raw passionate emotion in this poem. well done!
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Surprise!?!
lol
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Ok erotica all the way...love it!
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LOL @ who's your daddy...Cute.
Thank you so much for entering and the best of luck in this contest
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Thank you! I loved the part in Mr. and Mrs. Smith when he says "Come to Daddy" and she kicks him into a clock... and she says "Who's your daddy now?". It was my inspiration... lol. Again Thank you for the feedback
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