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A tiny mistake

A tiny mistake,
contols our future.
Our lifes hang on edge,
waiting for the answer.
A tiny mistake,
that creates life.
The feeling of not knowing,
not knowing anything.
Running your hand over my stomach,
you tell me "It'll be okay..."
And I know it will...
Wondering if life is being formed,
at this very moment inside my tired body.
A tiny mistake,
that wasn't a mistake.
Concieved in love,
if concieved at all.
A tiny flutter in my heart,
thinking it may just happen.
Knowing it's yours,
and it's mine.
Knowing that you'll be there,
every morning when I wake up.
And you'll help me,
for all those middle of the night crys.
A tiny mistake,
that woke us up,
A tiny mistake,
that seals our life.
A tiny mistake,
that wasn't a mistake.

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  • A to the Rron
    May 14, 2007

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    Wow, you really out did yourself on this one.

    I think its my new favorite out of all your works (and I've really liked them all so you can tell that this is awesome!) Keep up the amazing work.

    Stay sage- Arron.


  • LunaAmara
    May 9, 2007
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    i like this a lot, i can feel the mixed feelings you're having. it's not a mistake.