as the ashes begin to smoulder
and you lean against my shoulder
i find myself changing
and the emotions rearranging
ive finally learned to be your friend
and the heartbreak slowly starts to mend
with my mind so clouded and my body so sure
i never knew that you in fact were the cure
this love is different this love is kind
how could i have ever been so blind
id rather have you as my friend
than have our relationship end
ive achieved what i set out to do
ive finally gotten over you
ive changed
ive learned
a metamorphosis complete
Author notes
something odd that just popped out of my head....
Please tell me what you think
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It Seems To Speak
So much. So many deep concepts that can help others
in relationships as well to me possibly reflective. lol
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yes it is reflective
yes, this is very much so reflective...i fell for a friend who fell for one of my other friends...and i finally got over him and we had a good friendship...but now something has gone awry, and i havent even seen him in 3 months...im very sad about it, but i have learned that some enter your life for a reason and some for a season...some forever. He must have been a reason or season...
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Beautiful, it really is. It's good that one can get over another and still be their friend...though sometimes it doesn't always happen. It's good that you can write something like this. The rhyme int he first 2 lines caught my eye, and now I've read it I see it is fantastic
Midnight
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This is interestingly beautiful. To finally get over someone.. it is such a relief, like a catapillar in a cacoon.. we wait for what seems forever to be released of the imprisonment.. and finally when we are.. we take flight, something completely fresh, alive, beautiful and so relieved to finally fly after such a long wait. Great job!
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Like the little butterfly we are forever changing...Your words are filled with strength and contentment: Ive changed Ive learned...Beautiful.and thank you so much for sharing
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Aww liked it... it was sweet... well done
xXx
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I like it. Not sure why, but I can relate.
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