all this time i cant believe i believed you were here
here to stay
and i wont turn as i walk away from you
into the darkness of forever
your forever in my heart
i just wish you'd be forever in my arms
A contest entry
- &&im.your.intoxication by Zombie-x.
450 points, ended March 5, 2007, 9 entries
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hmmm.
i dont know what message your trying to portray......... -
This is a nice write. One your should be you're, and your punctuation is less than good, but the write itself it very good. I wish you well in the contest.
Sam
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its really sad how sometimes we can't get whatever we want, especially if we want someone we know we can't have..
nice write..
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