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Ordinarily Alone

Never quite made it
Never got the gist
A good girl
Who fights with her heart
Instead of her fist

Never quite fit in
Never good enough
Just a good girl
Who can't find her way
A diamond lost in the rough

Classy, Mature
Never fully matured
So closed in
Grew up to wear her heart on her sleeve
Her mouth opened and out her heart poured

No motivation
No inspiration
Doesn't quite grasp
Life and the adult relation
No value of money
Don't need and don't want it
Will always look beautiful
But will never ever flaunt it

Never quite sure
Never believed in her dreams
Just a good girl
Who was unique and mediocre
Altogether it seems.........

My hair, my picture, my profile page....

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  • wmike145
    February 28, 2007

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    You always come from the heart when you write... and that can never be faulted. I think this is the reason why we enjoy each other's work so much. It gives us insight into each other which we can relate from past experiences, and it feels good to know not only has someone felt the same as you have, but they show you that they understand it. Ok, that's it for my ramblings. Good job.