Somekind of monster

I am some kind of monster
not the one hiding
or fighting

I am some kind of monster
wishing to be your friend
but end up as your enemy

I am some-kind of monster
not willing to hurt anybody
but who end up by doing it

But what kind of monster am i then?

The one that only want kindness

without sadness

The one that want love

without pain

Then am i a monster?

or simply a dreamer?

A contest entry

Let Yourself Slip Into Madness by Shiro Okami. 700 points, ended March 5, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Society, love, philosophy, music, emotion, etc... by CrazyRebel. 456 points, ended July 1, 2007, 44 entries
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WriteOrWrong597
March 1, 2007

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OOOH LOVE LOVE LOVE the last two lines. Great job on this one! One's not a monster if one simply wants happiness without pain, I assure you. Deep and entertaining. Nice.
Love Me To Death
February 27, 2007
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LOVE IT
It is totaly awesome!
Shiro Okami
February 27, 2007
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Very interesting. Sort of philosophical.
FallenxAngelxMisfit
February 26, 2007

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you are not a monster..i really loved the
"without pain
Then am i a monster?
or simply a dreamer?"
is my favorite part. love the poem