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Dragon and Ranger

Open wide your giant wings,
Cran your scaly neck.
Take off into the moring sun,
return when your journy's done.
Sing out-loud your mighty song,
and watch the people tremor.
Relax in the eveing light,
enjoy your free life.

Look up into midnight skies,
Run fast between the trees.
A bow, at ready,
Shadows call,
watching Patiently .
Ye of the forest,
Watching the one of the sky.
wainting the feel of the wind,
wait Patiently.

Together as one,
dragon and rider,
save your world from doom.
Fly up high,
enjoy your life,
as dragon and rider,
wild creature and ranger,
Dark and light.

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 2, 2007
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    This is very nice. New and creative! I like that!
    I like how each stanza is descriptive, one of the dragon and the other of the ranger.

    Thank you so much for entering this piece in my contest.
    Keep on writing, and good luck
    Nooni


  • Maddogk
    March 2, 2007

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    Sounds to me like a game of tag or hide and seek, the Dragon and Ranger are playing...lol...[don't worry 'bout me, apparently my sense of humor is 'weird'...LMAO]
    Or the Dragon and Ranger are now heading home after a day of fighting evil of the universe...
    This one had my mind kicking along with lots of idea's. Which to me means a 'GREAT POEM'
    Well done...

    Jeffro


    • shadows hunter
      May 30, 2007
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      Thanx. Sorry it took so long to reply, I usually do but lifes been hectic ans boring as always, but thanx.

      ~shadows~