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z buzz

Walking Tall but also small
Feeling fun when playing ball
The invinsable man grabs her hand
and laying it on top of his man
while he pulls down her underwear and he just stares
looking for bumbs blisters or discolor,
looking again at her flower,
he notice a shape of a Z
Pondering who timed her "C"
Completely confident with his bat,
She throws the ball in his lap,
Aching and itching the invisable man does
All of sudden pops zoro and yells like my buzz?

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  • BeautifulDisaster9
    February 26, 2007

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    Haha.

    This made me giggle. Very creative, with simple rhyming. I like it!

    Well done, thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest!

    <3BeautifulDisaster9