I will,
Love you always.
Until my final day.
Never, will the love fade away,
Because the love I feel for you is real.
Our love is strong, it cannot die.
It's not like you or I.
Please love, survive.
Don't die.
A contest entry
- My AP Wife by RedTalon.
300 points, ended March 7, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It;s A Love Type Of Thing by paintitblack1001.
300 points, ended June 12, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this really isn't what i was looking for, but it's still a great write, good luck with the contest.
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Beautiful
I loved this. I found it to be quite beautiful. The way that you wrote it was just...astonishing. I loved the mere simplicity of it. I'm speechless. -
Awwww such a wonderful love poem so full of emotion. I so loved it. Keep up the wonderful writing


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sweet
a sweet, quaint, little poem of affection and hope. The sincerity flows through this, and I really enjoyed it for it put a smile upon my face...




