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Don't die, love.

I will,
Love you always.
Until my final day.
Never, will the love fade away,
Because the love I feel for you is real.
Our love is strong, it cannot die.
It's not like you or I.
Please love, survive.
Don't die.

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  • paintitblack1001
    May 7, 2007
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    this really isn't what i was looking for, but it's still a great write, good luck with the contest.


  • RedTalon
    February 28, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I loved this. I found it to be quite beautiful. The way that you wrote it was just...astonishing. I loved the mere simplicity of it. I'm speechless.


  • tawk gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    Awwww such a wonderful love poem so full of emotion. I so loved it. Keep up the wonderful writing


  • RacinThePen
    February 26, 2007

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    sweet

    a sweet, quaint, little poem of affection and hope. The sincerity flows through this, and I really enjoyed it for it put a smile upon my face...