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I am in love

I am in love.

when I touch his hand it comforts me.

When I look into his eyes it makes me feel good.

When I hug him it lets me know that he cares.

I mis the one I love a lot.

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I wrote this on Jan,11,2003 just found it in some of my poem notes and thought that I would share it. I wrote this for my boyfriend.

please tell me what you think be honest

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  • sunny day
    April 6, 2007

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    What a wonderful poem for the one you love. Thank you so much for sharing this one with all of us. Even when simply stated, love shines so brightly. I hope your boyfriend liked this, it was beautiful. Love and God bless, Joyce

  • Revwilliamfoos
    February 26, 2007
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    very good

    simple is the way of thought which brings forth a great message keep doing well
    love papa


  • She burns
    February 26, 2007

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    Awwww so touching and very heartfelt, the love and beauty of it, that feeling, Oh I want to feel it.....
    I love this so much, It's like a sonf for me too...