I don't know what to do. I feel like i am lost.
I think i love you. I dont know what to do.
Your my friend, if i express my feelings
will you still be there in the end.
I'm afraid things will get wierd, but I wish i could tell you how i feel.
I'm not all that you think i am.
I'm not the bad boy you see
I'm not the angel either
I'm not the demon
I'm not the saint.
I'm the lover
but I have done things i wish i hadn't
I am in good concience
but my blood runs taint
with the memories of what i used to be.
i lost my heart, my soul
all i wanted was to escape reality
and i thought true love would never find me.
Then you, my friend
showed me that there is life without pain
there is risks with no gain
all i wish is to know how you feel about me
is it the same way i feel about you?
Please tell me what you think
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I totally know how you feel. last year I had a best friend who I liked more than a friend.. but I totally stuffed up.. and now we don't even talk to eachother. I still like him tho and so it's really painful to know that he doesn't like me the same way. be careful because if you get in too deep.. it could go the wrong way.
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I liked the way that you showed how you felt here although the grammar is a little off (if you'd like me to go through it with you I will, I won't embarass(sp?)you otherwise) This was a good poem, I liked how you showed that you wanted to love your friend rather than just being a friend. I liked the question at the end as it showed that you cared about your friends feelings etc and hoped you could be lovers rather than just friends.
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Pozo
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Beautifully Tragic
Tread carefully my friend. You are swimming in deep water... I speak from very personal experience... You should read my poem, sometimes the person you fall for, isnt ready to catch you... I think you might find it interesting... I hope that your situation has a happy ending my friend... beautiful write, heartfelt emotional and real... I sincerely know how you feel. xoxoxo Shonda
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