6 sets of hands
touched her body
that day
6 sets of hands
abused her innocence
in every way
a dozen eyes
watching her
get defiled
6 cell phones
911 was
never dialed
6 cold hearts
didn't care
she was just fifteen
6 sick minds
committing acts
so obscene
6 evil souls
eternally damned
to Hell
1 little girl lost
safe within her
protective shell
Author notes
<3 I chose option 1, to write about something bad that has happened to myself. At 15 I was gang raped by a fraternity.
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450 points, ended August 24, 2008, 11 entries
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Sad yet so well written
It takes courage and strength to write about this, you have shown your inner heart, may they find a punishment to suit there crime, Blessings John
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Very intense! I am so very sorry that this happened to you!
I wish you all the best and admire you for sharing something so very, very personal...
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Heidi,
I am so sorry you had this happen. No one deserve such a thing to happen to them. I too have my own scars from the past that remind me of which I care not to remember.
Blessings
Bel
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Whoa.
This is incredibly intense and I am so sorry this had to happen to you! Well written indeed. Best of luck to you in my contest and thank you for entering!
<3BeautifulDisaster9 -
awwwwwww
this is sad there are certain lessons that are created in harsh ituations I can't imagine what this was like for you though at 14 I was raped so I have some idea. I believe that thse are situations we are selfs ask for prior to incarnation to allow us the oppertunity to learn a lesson in this case unconditional love to forgive the tresspassers but only My belief I wish you well onn the continued healing process one was endure to remain healthy in life
love and life,
Blaze
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WOW!?! That was...I don't know, but it was good!?!
Good job and good luck.
Unfaithfully Your's
Of Blood and Tears
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