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Dedicated to my grandfather

You have been gone
Two complete years
I sat by your grave
And there went my tears

I couldn’t help but cry
I haven’t seen your face in so long
I keep your memory
In one of my favorite songs

I say by your grave
From noon till three
Then I remember all memories
Between you and me

I sat by your grave
Trying to stop those tears
But I couldn’t make them stop
For you had been gone to yeas

Unfortunately
I am the only one who went
On the day we lost you
And so many wept

Sitting there I felt
Your were still here
And my heart was never sore
And all my loved ones were held dear

So that day
I let it all out
So now I will accept you being gone
My heart will no longer pout

I just feel bad
That you are no longer here
But I will hold you close
Keep you held very dear

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  • grannyeri gold member
    March 1, 2007

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    Very heartfelt poem you have written here - sentiments well expressed in these lines. Easy to read and understanad that you miss this person dearly. Think you meant to say sat, rather than say ain that third verse. That's sometimes what it takes to finally accept someone's death is a long cry. Enjoyed this poem.


  • Valdar Cuebiyari
    February 27, 2007

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    ...I lost my grandpa three days before my 11th birthday and we were very close...so I feel with you... This is really well written...

  • NickRudlong
    February 27, 2007

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    wow... I lost my grandpa when I was 6... he was only 57... I know exactly what that is like... this was, amazingly written. I really liked it a lot. thanks. keep up the good work! Te Quiero -Nick


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    February 26, 2007

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    This is truly beautiful. I know it's hard for you. It always has been. I love this poem though. It's beautiful and you put so much emotion and feeling into this. It's almost like I can tell how you're feeling just by reading this. I think this is your best piece of all. It's magnificent. It's sad yet it's also one of the most beautiful things i've ever read. You've really come a long way from your first poem and i'm sure you'll get much better as you keep writing. keep smiling and try not to get depressed.I'm always here for you. LYLAS.

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