there was once a young man called Seth
who had really terrible breath
his own halitosis
was a form of psychosis
so his own mother put him to death
A contest entry
- Limerick Time #2 by AliceinPoetryLand.
300 points, ended February 26, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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And how exactly does this fit in with the contest?
Sorry.
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The halitosis stopped people in his vicinity from breathing - that was why it fitted your contest so well. What a pity you did not see that.
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Still I found it innappropiate for the conest.
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I had to click on a poem with this title! This is a great limerick, on a perfect topic for this form. Very funny and well structured. Well done.
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HAHAHAHAHAHA!
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Oh my! Wonderful rhymes and imagery. Good use of assonance. Loved the twist in L5. Congrats on the HM!
All the best in life,
Charishma
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Ewww lol Well done indeed. I loke this
Fits limerick rules well! Thanks for this entry and good luck in my contest.
Gaylene
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This is the best limerick I have read all day.
It is also the worst, so up yours.
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Good one
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hahahahaha
made me laugh - great job!!!!!
really loved the second rhyming pair!!!!
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