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The Brummy

There was a young woman from Brum
Who drank a bottle of rum
She sat on the grass
and it tickled her ass
then the surprise was to cum.

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    February 28, 2007

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    LOL...Now that's one very serious problem she got! Heheehe..lovely humour here. Wonderful rhymes, rhythm and imagery. Congrats on the Bronze!

    All the best,
    Charishma


  • Cat -lover08
    February 26, 2007

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    Omg

    Mum I'm glad you're writing more here at AP, but....

    less of the rude parts please lol, this sounded funny not that I understood it though lol, this was a great piece, well done good luck


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    February 26, 2007
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    hehe love it! Thanks so much for this entry and good luck in my contest.
    Gaylene


  • -I love my midget-
    February 26, 2007

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    I am originally from Wolverhampton and would like to assure you that Brummy women come a lot easier than that!