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The Color Upon My Nails

The color swirls,
I can't imagine.
Darks and lights
and bolds and dulls.
My hand is steady, brush at
fingertip.
The night passes on
behind me.
A rainbow of
color,
a pool of light.
My eyes strain
near.
I straighten the
paint.
A fantasy world springs to
life.
Color filled rivers,
skies are splashed.
My room forms around me
as I brush the last
stroke

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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    February 27, 2007

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    I had commented before, but AP was being stupid.
    Anyways this beautiful and it is better than what I had in mind or what I expected.
    I love it all and I love these lines the most:
    "A fantasy world springs to
    life.
    Color filled rivers,
    skies are splashed."

    Thank you so much for entering, good luck and keep on writing,
    Nooni