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Without Valentine

Missing image
Your innocent heart
serves by body, denying soul,
in my stoic situation of cosmetic wealth;
for I have kissed a metallic wind
growing still-born regret in February's song.


A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 27, 2007

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    Well this is indeed creative and filled with immense thought and terrific wording. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 26, 2007
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    Of course, you've nailed it, dear Scribe...Gorgeous...& I have always loved Pino Daeni's artwork, as you may know; I've used quite a few of them in the past several years...Good luck in the contest, my Friend... Wanda


  • poet2angels gold member
    February 26, 2007
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    perfect

    Fits the contest perfectly:
    short but amazing...
    Looks like a winner to me!

    Lynda