Your innocent heart
serves by body, denying soul,
in my stoic situation of cosmetic wealth;
for I have kissed a metallic wind
growing still-born regret in February's song.
A contest entry
- A challenge by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Well this is indeed creative and filled with immense thought and terrific wording. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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Of course, you've nailed it, dear Scribe...Gorgeous...& I have always loved Pino Daeni's artwork, as you may know; I've used quite a few of them in the past several years...Good luck in the contest, my Friend...
Wanda


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perfect
Fits the contest perfectly:
short but amazing...
Looks like a winner to me!
Lynda






