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Outside the Square

"If I lay here,
If I just lay here...
would you lie with me and just forget the world?"


Watching the Clouds fly by,
you in my thoughts.

(I wonder, DO you ever think about me?)

I know I'm falling,
even though I don't want to.

(I know I think about you)

I know I'm going to crash an burn,
but still I smile....

(Probably enough for the both of us)


I'm not pretty.
I'm not smart.
I'm not even popular...
But...
I am in love with you.

Author notes

"Lets waste time, Chasing Cars around our heads...."

You're just like a cloud, you're out of reach.
So I'll sit and watch the clouds, cause sometimes... even if only sometimes... even the clouds touch the ground.....

MDH... Don't start. :P everyone else, go ahead. :P

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  • Shiny
    March 3, 2007
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    Aww soooo kawaii!!!!! That is sooo sweet Sarah-chan!!!
    I'm feeling all mushy now XD


  • mydarlinghamburger
    February 27, 2007

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    :( y?

    Awww... how did u kno I jst wanted 2 say that this was well written and to keep up the good work... and i kinda kno wat ur going through... pls don't hurt me!!!
    Luv MDH