So that's her...
The woman who stole my man.
She isn't much to look at...
What's she got that I ain't got...
My man.
A contest entry
- A challenge by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is totally cool and so sincerely realistic. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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*nods* Very intersting, I can see how you got your poem from that picture. It's very deep and thoughtful even though it's so short. I really enjoied reading this. ^_^
Hell Angel
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Thank you for your kind comment and the applause. The contest demanded that it be "short and amazing". Not sure I hit the mark, but I tried.
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Wondering how one falls short is a very difficult examination....this was so sad...I am going to have to go and read a funny poem now...
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Sorry for making you sad, it was just what I saw in the women's face when I looked at the picture. Thanks for the review and the applause.
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great one.
hope this didn't happen to you...?
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Yes, it did. Thanks for the comment and the applause.
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sorry it happened
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What a great take on this picture. I so loved it and it made me laugh. Good luck in the contest
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and the applause.
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