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quiet conversation

lightning flickers in your faraway eyes
No comment nightcrawls from your closed lips
So familiar
You sit quiet as a felled tree
And you watch the air fall between us

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    This is really grasping and the word usage is tremendous. A great piece! Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.