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Through a warm web


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Light or dark green has a sheen
You nailed me down mailing them
exactly in an un abbreviated form
though in short  but  beautiful and truly smart in form

Your  eyes sizzle  sharply at me
blinding me even in brightening spots

Your ,mind and soul  shower on me
all the heart filled affection streaming deeply into my chords

No fashionable strings  can sting our passion or attach any articulation
Only a devoted and dedicated  word of praise can do the act

Splash not any  engineered epithets towards me
I am damn tired  please don’t dampen  my  spirits
Now I only hope to rest on your silky lap
Slipping all my dreams to  your bosom lines
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  • NooNiThEWitcH
    March 1, 2007

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    Please put your option number in your author's comments. I will be back with a comment then, I promise


    • Purush
      March 1, 2007
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      thank you iam able to catch you on time
      purush