across life's table
points dissect
seemingly random
yet familiar
for we have all
served
and been served
with the same thoughts
hopes and dreams
differences small
similarities plenty
in the end
there is a oneness
that represents
the whole
A contest entry
- A challenge by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short and amazing
I love the thoughts you express here, Simple yet powerful Such talent, WRite on poet
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i hope you win with this one =) i like how its short and says alot you have good talent with short and sweet. great job bunny *god bless* ♥kelc
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Beautifully penned and interpreted my friend. My ve y best to you in this contest
Gaylene
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So real, so captivating, so profound! Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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