Stood up again;
how ironic.
The waitress looks over,
anxious to leave...
she has her own date tonight.
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- A challenge by Lavender Butterfly.
390 points, ended February 27, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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So clever thats what the C stands for isn't it mate, just jokes, you always come up with something way different to the normal way of thinking, well done buddy
Brenden
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very nice...again...I always reread because there is always something in the way you write that provokes some feeling inside...
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This made me smile. Love the approach and direction you have taken this. Quite clever and indeed creative. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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