The fear wades through the heavy tides of my thoughts
paralyzing haunting screaming
Rage within the silence- only the trick of the darned light
A contest entry
- Super quickie by Lavender Butterfly.
370 points, ended February 26, 2007, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hmmmm...
this poem has a very powerful effect but I am not sure about the last lines. I loved the first two lines though. they were simply stunning.
I could feel the fear. It was amazing!
this poem deserved the bronze. How could I not have commented? maybe I was not smart enough back then to understand but now I am! and I think this piece is simply amazing.
congrats on the bronze!
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Wow
This poem shows that you could be an epic poet with Haiku and I'm sure you know Haiku is difficult! This is excellently crafted, raw and full of vivid imagery. This should be framed and posted up across the world! Again, you show so much talent here.
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Interesting and intriguing. Well done and thankyou for sharing.
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So expressive and attention grabbing. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.
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