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Bathing in the fiery glow,
naked together,
as our star went supernova.



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  • LAPoe gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    Celestially speaking... this shines above all
    others, Mr C you are a in your own right.
    Shine on. laurie.


  • going nowhere
    February 26, 2007

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    I am surprised this didn't win something. How you can put so few words together, yet have such power in them is beyond my capacity. I liked this.


  • Blueskywonder
    February 26, 2007

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    What a vividly powerful poem. A picture created from so few words. Well done and thankyou for sharing.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    This is so unique and serenely worded. Thanks so much for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.

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