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Haiku 23

beginnings are starts
as with triumphant first breaths
newborns wail and cry

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  • silverscent gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    Very lovely - the miracle of birth.
    The very first event in ones life, which is the end of one thing, and beginning of something new.
    Nicely written!!!


  • Random Lily
    February 26, 2007

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    Very pretty. I love haiku, it can state so much in three lines. Like a small moment. Beautiful poem.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26, 2007

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    This is quite clever and you have expressed much in few words. Thanks for sharing... x Love and light, Butterfly.