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Pure Delight

like a daisy on an open field
flowing with the wind
your petals dance and shake and turn
you make me think, a thoughtful sin

your grace is violent
it stops my heart
I'll watch you laugh
as I fall apart

the way you wiggle
when you walk
I know it's me
you aim to mock

I love the scent
I smell in your hair
I dream up and dream
and you are there

the rain pours down
your shirt so white
I get a view
of pure delight

I love to think
of you in leather
with cuffs and whips
what could be better?

So let me kiss you
on the lips
move down your body
and below your hips

I think I know
I swear I do
I know I must
I Love You

Author notes

I havent yet found this girl..
but I hope that one day I will.

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Comments


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 3, 2007

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    ohhhhhh you are some one i really didn't understand
    it was nice though
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 27, 2007

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    you know you will it is only a matter of time, this is something, i mean that you dida great job on this poem, i loved reading it, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • tawk gold member
    February 26, 2007

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    I hope that you will find her too, it will happen. Great write so sensual and romantic. Good luck in my contest