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Wanting

To be the other ~
They contemplate,

as lives divided
go unnoticed.

A contest entry

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  • Quiet places
    February 26, 2007

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    Short & Sweet

    You have done well here! Much said in few words. Gret thinking! I like this alot. good luck with a winner here, Don


  • Spiritual Nature
    February 26, 2007
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    Excellent write.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    February 26, 2007
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    This is exactly what I wanted. Says it all in few words. They ponder on what it would be like to be the other, yet they remain oblivious to each other's thoughts. Thanks so much for your entry... x Love and light, Butterfly.