I am so cold,
I am so lonely!
Where did you go?
Why did you leave me?
I need you to warm me up,
I need you to come through,
Things are going to be not
The same when I'm without you.
I'm eating a banana,
So I think, as well, I might,
"Where are you, dear pajama?!"
Keep shouting in the night!
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Option 2...Happy/Funny stuff. How funny is it that I can't find my PJ's?
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Neat poem. Good luck
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A Very good poem but I did not laugh out loud.
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very cute. the banana to ryhme with pajama was random...lol. Good luck in the contest!
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Very odd to say the least and not what I was expecting at all. Definitely threw me for a loop. Great work.
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lol it did have a clever hurous aspect within it which made me smile as its uniquly done well done with this
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Very clever! Made me smile...and I'm a sourpuss!
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Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!!!! This was hilarious and totally unexpecting. keep up the good work and great write.
Best of luck in my contest
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This is really random! I love it! It's funny in the way that it makes you think of something completely different before you realise what it actually is. Congratulations on an awesome write and Good Luck.
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thank you for your wonderful entry in this contest! you are truly talented. points and trophies dont need that to prove it!
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Iliked how at first it seemed like it would be another lost love poem bnut then turne into something funny. Thank you for not depressing me and good luck in the contest.
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I don't know. I like my pajamas, too, but I didn't really think this was funny. Also it may be just me, but it took me a little while to figure out what this was about. Perhaps I should try sleeping? But the rhythm and flow was very nicely handled. Good luck in my contest!
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I love my pyjamas too...lol...could live in them all day long...lol, Thanks for your entry!
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My mind has spoken: THIS IS CRAZY! I love the mushy beginning that just turns random. Keep writing, Meggh xxxxxxxxxxxx
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Thank you for entering. I like the suprise twist at the end. Good luck.
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cute and funny..
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i am so confused.....it's funny, but confusing....
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thank you for entering with this very funny write and good luck in the contest and with the pyjamas ha ha hah
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want me to send you a heating pad till you find you PJ's...I love the little write.Good Luck in the contest
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Aww, *sniffles*!
I'd love a heating pad.
But also found the PJ's!!!!!
YEEEE!
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Cool
- this is a really great piece - i especially love the final stanza!!!
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Glad you managed to read 'till the end. I was worried people will think after reading the first lines "Oh, god, cliche` again..." and they'd stop before they reach the last stanza. Which is the idea of the poem, actually.
Thank you!
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You make me laugh and smile with this one. I miss my pj's too. They were nice and warm and my puppy tore a big hole in them. I like your work.
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Awww, I'm sorry for your PJ's!
I'm glad I made you both laugh and smile with my poem :-D - basicaly, this is one of the things I tried!
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this is the humor I LOVE! and I must dissapoint you with something: the more you tried to stay away from philosophical influences, the closer you got it and I confess that the flavour of this poem indulges me to think(I don't know why ) of an aiurit philosopher struggling to go to bed well dony,viviana!well done indeed! -
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Okay, you caught me...
An aiurit philosopher struggling HARD to go to bed XD...indeeed!
At least I didn't say it covered in hard words, did I?
Thank you, thank you! (now I am laughing!! )
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Ha Hahahaha! I thought this was a love poem! When in reality, you miss your pj's! Man, I'm still laughing over here! Like the eating the banana part, makes me crave fruit! Strawberries rule! The ultimate fruit baby! Yea!
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YES!
Haha, my master plan is finished! I've tricked 2 people into reading this fake love poem! Bwhahha! XD
Man, how I miss my PJ's...and an apple. Gah, I need an apple RIGHT NOW!
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Heh... I thought to myself "Oh, just another cliche teeny love poem..." I was wrong. The end brought laughter surging from within me. It's a great kind of parody on the usual lovey dovey omg, I love you why did you leave me blah blah poetry we see (and, occasionally, write) as poets. Good work!
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